Kenshin Armida Verlox

[Kenshin Armida Verlox]

we're the face of a new generation NAME | Kenshin Armida Verlox ALIAS | Crystal Wearer; given to him due to the bracelet he wears, he seems fine with it. Story Weaver; given to him due to him being a story teller, he's fine with it. AGE & BIRTHDATE | 19 years, August 21 GENDER | male SEXUALITY | straight NATION | air nomad CURRENT RESIDENCE | western air temple OCCUPATION | Story teller ALIGNMENT | neutral good we're the ones with no reservation HEIGHT & WEIGHT | 178cm 65kg HAIR | short dark blue that is long enough to go in a small pony tail in the back EYE | sapphire blue ATTIRE | Normal clothes: Despite being a air bender, his choice of clothing is different from normal monks. He can be seen wearing a silver trench coat that has three small buttons that keep the top part closed. The length of the trench coat goes down to his ankles. A long ruby red scarf around his neck that is almost as long as the trench coat. He wears a black shirt underneath the trench coat. Dark navy blue pants with boots being knee high and dark purple. He wears a bracelet on his fright wrist that is made out of wood with a scarlet red crystal shard in the center of it. He can't take it off. Acolyte robe: Kenshin is hardly ever in this. When he is, it's the basic robe for all young airbenders; since the robes belonging to monks are actually for those that mastered airbending. The basic robe is a orange shawl over long sleeved shirt that is yellow with double layered pants, and brown knee high boots. The top layer of the pants is yellow with the bottom being brown. ABNORMALITIES | n/a IMAGE LINK | normal clothesLINK don't give a damn about your cold calculations POSITIVE TRAITS | NEGATIVE TRAITS | LIKES | DISLIKES | welcome to the master plan BENDING ELEMENT & SUB-BENDING | air bending. No sub bending SKILLS | Kenshin keeps to the normal style of airbending, using spiral movements in a fight. This allows for him to change direction at any given time and use airbending when needed. WEAPONS | n/a PET | Betra, sky bison that is Kenshin's best friend and main transport your skin is burning at the sight of me HISTORY | Kenshin was born to two airbenders in the western air temple. Kenshin has grown up there without any cares. The bracelet he wears is something he's had since his childhood, a gift from his parents. He meet Bertra as a ten year old and the two have become good friends. As a child, Kenshin often found himself wandering around the temple or listening to stories from the monks. It was listening to these stories that caused him to want to be a story teller.         His whole life has been everything any air nomads life is. Calm, peaceful, and so many other things that don't deal with the war. Although he doesn't like war nor others getting hurt. He does wish for some excitement in his life. Even though he wished for excitement, Kenshin was always preoccupied with his training, story telling, helping around the temple, and going through lectures from the monks about traditions.

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[Nox]

Once again, the coding is shot.

You're missing a like and a dislike.

You left in "name you go by" and inserted "vocaloid" in places they shouldn't be.

Why would a bracelet be in abnormalities? Sure, he can't take it off... But abnormalities is for scars/tattooes.

You say he doesn't stick to certain traditions, yet is stubborn with beliefs. That's rather self-contradictory.

[Kenshin Armida Verlox]

fixed. Sorry again

[Nox]

Your history isn't so much a history as much as it is a personality. Outside of the first two sentences, maybe, there's not a whole lot to go on as far as anything historical.

[Kenshin Armida Verlox]

edited

[Nox]

You need to expand your history a little. It's too short. We only require two paragraphs; and you have one and a half right now. 

[Kenshin Armida Verlox]

edited

[Nox]